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Don't be Afraid

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It was called The Terminator. Not based on the movie or anything...just a rollar coaster with a huge drop right at the beginning, loops that never seemed to end, and the speed of it was just...dangerous.
Nate stared at it and gulped slowly. He wanted to get on...but he was literally afraid that the ride would kill him.
"What are you afraid of?" Jesus asked him as He also stared at the rollar coaster.
Nate didn't answer. He just gulped again.
"Nate, c'mon! You aren't scared of a little rollar coaster, are you?" one of Nate's friends asked as he ran towards the line.
'Yes!!!' Nate's mind screamed.
"No!" he replied.
"Alright, then go." Jesus said as He pushed Nate towards The Terminator.
"Wha...are You crazy, Lord?! The thing is gonna kill me!!!" Nate whispered harshly.
"No it's not. Go, have fun." Jesus said.
"Naaaaate. Duuude, come on. Stop standing there and get in line!"
Nate looked at Jesus in desperation. Jesus simply smiled and said, "Go on!"

The line was too long. Well, for Nate, it was too short. Soon enough, it was his turn. His friends sat together, leaving him to sit by himself.
"What...why isn't anybody sitting next to me?" he asked roughly.
"Aww, look at poor old Nate. Hey, do you need me to hold your purse for you?" his friends teased.
Nate fumed inside. How dare his friends leave him to sit by himself.
Just before the ride was about to start, He noticed somebody sitting in the seat next to him. It was Jesus.
"Jesus!!! Please, help me, I'm fricken terrified right now." he whimpered.
"Still, why are you afraid? Don't be afraid. It isn't going to be that bad, I promise."
"Yeah, easy for you to say..." Nate grumbled.
"Ten!!! Nine!!! Eight!!! Seven!!!"
Nate's entire body turned pale.
"...Three!!! Two!!! One!!!"
Everything was still. The passengers waited for the ride to shoot like a rocket up towards the drop of death. Without even knowing it, he grabbed Jesus' hand and squeezed it with all of his might.
Then, the ride shot up like a slingshot all the way towards the top. The passengers laughed and shouted...Nate felt like peeing himself and he felt tears coming.
"Don't be afraid. I'm right here." Jesus consoled as He stroked Nate's hand with His thumb.
Just then, the ride shot down so fast, Nate thought that the skin on his face would all fall off. He screamed loudly and He noticed Jesus with a big smile on His face.
After the last loop, Nate felt paralyzed. He couldn't move anything. Jesus shook him slightly and he stared up at Him slowly.
"That...was...AMAZING!!!!!! JESUS, IT WAS INCREDIBLE!!!"
Jesus smiled and said, "See? I told you it wasn't that bad!"
"Yeah!!! You were totally right!!! As always."
"Nate! Dude, that was totally awesome!" one of Nate's friends said as he ran towards him.
"I know! I feel so pumped right now, and I'm ready for anything!"
Nate's friends looked at each other and one of them asked, "Really? Cuz uh...we want to go on that one next."
Nate turned around and saw that his friend was pointing to a ride called Cold Blade. And as he watched how it functioned...he panicked. Again.
Jesus simply smiled.
Don't be afraid!
Hehe, I got this idea based off of my own experience.
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animehearts1322's avatar
lol That's exacly what it was like for me when I went to Silver Dollar City